Saturday 21 February 2009

Once upon a time....


There lived a king and his queen.

Their tale of love

spread across the world.

Birds, animals, trees, clouds, people

all talked about their eternal love.

But they lived unaware

that they loved each other

and wanted to live happily together ever after!


This was the end of

an unusual folk tale

that was never read to children on bed

as it din't have a happy end!


Should every love tale

end "happily together ever after???!!!"

8 comments:

peter ivan said...

you touched a line which very few have expressed.

Ragpicker said...

Short and Simple . Nice writes. Thanks for sharing

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@Ragpicker

Thankx for peeping in... :)

kim said...

sweet, short and lovely i liked u... :)

Vipul Buwa said...

sweet and short!!
nice poem...
nice bog. keep it up.

Santiago said...

good one...:)

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ kim, vipul and santiago

Thank you :)
Hope I should continue then.

Jasmine Rahul said...

Very different theme.But i wish it had a happy end.bcz i want all luv stories 2 hav a happy ending.Otherwise its so painful