Tuesday 18 March 2008

"My Hubby's Love"


Finally,
got married!!!

I love him.
He also loved.

I saw my entire world,
in his sparkling eyes....
Oh! what a life indeed!!!

His love,
swirled up the blood.
So intense,
enchanting,
drilling bones,
caring,
overwhelming,
potent,
and what not!!!

Wait a minute!!!

You thought he loved me???
Well, my hubby loved his love.

I should be sad,
desperate.
Aah!!! what a pain indeed!!!

Still, I smiled.
For I loved him!!!

5 comments:

achu said...

a realistic one..i liked it..

Njaan oru mookasrothaavayirunnu
Annu njaan ninakku priyappettaval aayirunnu
Neeyaanenne sabdikkaan padippichathu
Neeyaanenikku vaakkukal pakarnnu thannathu
Ennittum enthinaaninnu nee
ente vaakkukale bhayappedunnathu??
Ava ninte sabdathe khandicho?
Ava ninne nisabdanaakkiyo?
Ava ninte hridayathil thodaan
nee anuvadikkaathathenthe?

i had an experience which led me to write these lines

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

Thankx friend.

Anonymous said...

hope you are alright

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

I'm alright mathew... :)

Jasmine Rahul said...

It touched my heart.So sad