Monday 21 January 2008

'Pravda'

'Pravda'*
my baby girl was named.
There she lied,
in front of me...
the beauty of the world.

Tiny legs beating the cruelty.
Tiny hands pointing the reality.


"Did he love you ever???"
People asked.
'Yes', I avowed.
"This is the truth of our love!!!"





"Pravda" - is the name of the newspaper in the communist Russia which means 'Truth'

6 comments:

woods said...

xcllnt..so little u wrote n so much it means....i wish i coul write like u!!

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ dibbasatya


Thank You friend.

This poem is little as the baby girl... "Pravda"

Glad that u liked it!!!

:-)

girish varma ...balussery.... said...

oh.. shrisht... nice poem.... simple lines... i like too much....

Santiago said...

"Did he love you ever???"
People asked.
'Yes', I avowed.
"This is the truth of our love!!!"


Hypocrisy exists in each one of us and comes out in various forms...

beautiful language... i liked your laguage :)

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

@ Girish n Santiago

Thank you ur views!!

mrniiiceguy said...

"pravda" lingers on ... ?